Prison Professors

Module 10

Conclusion

The video that accompanies this lesson offers more insight and commentary that will help you prepare an effective narrative as part of your comprehensive mitigation strategy.

Module Resources

Learning Objectives

Tie Together

Write a conclusion that ties together every section

Remorse

Emphasize remorse, accountability, and transformation

Ask for Mercy

Ask for mercy in a respectful, credible manner

Final Impression

Understand how conclusion serves as the "final impression"

Lesson Summary

The conclusion is the final section of your sentencing narrative. Unlike earlier parts, which provide detail and depth, the conclusion should be short, powerful, and direct. Its purpose is to leave the judge with a clear picture of who you are today, what you have learned, and how you intend to live going forward.

The transcript emphasizes that this is not a place for new arguments, excuses, or excessive length. By this point, you have already shown the judge your background, the influences that led to your crime, the lessons you've learned, and the steps you are taking to make things right. The conclusion simply ties all of those threads together into a statement of remorse, transformation, and forward-looking commitment.

Three Truths to Acknowledge

A strong conclusion acknowledges three truths:

  1. The harm cannot be undone. Recognize the damage caused to society, to your family, and to those you pulled into your conduct. Avoid minimizing or rationalizing.
  2. The responsibility is yours. Accept that consequences are necessary and that you alone bear responsibility for your actions.
  3. The future can be different. Show that you have changed—and that your change is demonstrated through action, not words.

Importance of Tone

In the sample video, you will see the importance of tone. You are not asking to avoid punishment; you are showing the judge why you are a candidate for mercy. This can be phrased respectfully:

"Honorable Judge, I accept the law requires consequences. What I ask is that you consider the sincerity of my remorse, the transformation I have worked hard to begin, and my pledge to continue living responsibly."

The conclusion may also directly ask the judge for mercy. If you believe it fits, you can write: "If you sense that I am a candidate for rehabilitation, I ask that you have mercy on me at sentencing." A request like this, framed with humility, can be effective.

Beyond Sentencing

Finally, remember that the conclusion is not only for sentencing. It will also serve as part of your larger mitigation strategy—supporting prison program eligibility, supervised release petitions, and even clemency applications. Judges and officials want to see consistency, and your conclusion reinforces your pledge to live differently moving forward.

Key Takeaways

  • Keep the conclusion short, sincere, and forward-looking.
  • Emphasize remorse, accountability, and transformation.
  • Accept punishment while respectfully requesting mercy.
  • End with a clear pledge: this is not a short-term promise, but a lifelong commitment.

Self-Directed Exercise

Draft your Conclusion (300–500 words). In it:

1
Acknowledge that you cannot undo the past.
2
Accept full responsibility for your conduct.
3
Express remorse and gratitude for the opportunity to change.
4
Respectfully request that the judge consider your transformation and view you as a candidate for mercy.

Save this as the final section of your sentencing narrative.

Assessment Questions

1

The main purpose of the Conclusion is to—

  • a) Introduce new facts about the case
  • b) Restate legal arguments
  • c) Tie together themes of remorse, accountability, and transformation
  • d) Minimize responsibility
2
True/False: The Conclusion should be the longest section of the sentencing narrative.
3
Write one respectful way to ask a judge for mercy in your conclusion.
4
What three themes should every Conclusion emphasize?
5
Why is it important that your Conclusion be consistent with the rest of your narrative?