Module 10
Conclusion
The video that accompanies this lesson offers more insight and commentary that will help you prepare an effective narrative as part of your comprehensive mitigation strategy.
Module Resources
Learning Objectives
Tie Together
Write a conclusion that ties together every section
Remorse
Emphasize remorse, accountability, and transformation
Ask for Mercy
Ask for mercy in a respectful, credible manner
Final Impression
Understand how conclusion serves as the "final impression"
Lesson Summary
The conclusion is the final section of your sentencing narrative. Unlike earlier parts, which provide detail and depth, the conclusion should be short, powerful, and direct. Its purpose is to leave the judge with a clear picture of who you are today, what you have learned, and how you intend to live going forward.
The transcript emphasizes that this is not a place for new arguments, excuses, or excessive length. By this point, you have already shown the judge your background, the influences that led to your crime, the lessons you've learned, and the steps you are taking to make things right. The conclusion simply ties all of those threads together into a statement of remorse, transformation, and forward-looking commitment.
Three Truths to Acknowledge
A strong conclusion acknowledges three truths:
- The harm cannot be undone. Recognize the damage caused to society, to your family, and to those you pulled into your conduct. Avoid minimizing or rationalizing.
- The responsibility is yours. Accept that consequences are necessary and that you alone bear responsibility for your actions.
- The future can be different. Show that you have changed—and that your change is demonstrated through action, not words.
Importance of Tone
In the sample video, you will see the importance of tone. You are not asking to avoid punishment; you are showing the judge why you are a candidate for mercy. This can be phrased respectfully:
"Honorable Judge, I accept the law requires consequences. What I ask is that you consider the sincerity of my remorse, the transformation I have worked hard to begin, and my pledge to continue living responsibly."
The conclusion may also directly ask the judge for mercy. If you believe it fits, you can write: "If you sense that I am a candidate for rehabilitation, I ask that you have mercy on me at sentencing." A request like this, framed with humility, can be effective.
Beyond Sentencing
Finally, remember that the conclusion is not only for sentencing. It will also serve as part of your larger mitigation strategy—supporting prison program eligibility, supervised release petitions, and even clemency applications. Judges and officials want to see consistency, and your conclusion reinforces your pledge to live differently moving forward.
Key Takeaways
- Keep the conclusion short, sincere, and forward-looking.
- Emphasize remorse, accountability, and transformation.
- Accept punishment while respectfully requesting mercy.
- End with a clear pledge: this is not a short-term promise, but a lifelong commitment.
Self-Directed Exercise
Draft your Conclusion (300–500 words). In it:
Save this as the final section of your sentencing narrative.
Assessment Questions
The main purpose of the Conclusion is to—
- a) Introduce new facts about the case
- b) Restate legal arguments
- c) Tie together themes of remorse, accountability, and transformation
- d) Minimize responsibility